Essay: the most rewarding thing

It was in January 2010 when the classified advertisement on the daily newspaper by the Accounting Institute drew my attention. The ad encouraged readers to enroll in the courses to become a US Certified Public Accountant. At those days, I was just idling days away without doing any particular things but just watching TV. I, all of sudden, thought that I should not waste time like that, so I called the Institute to check tuition, the duration of the courses, processes to test a CPA exam, etc. I also gathered more information via Internet about the CPA exam. Since I have not majored in accounting, I had to acquire more than 50 credits in various accounting related subjects to get qualifications to take the exam. So, I went to the institute almost for two years to study and earn the credits. Although I devoted most of my personal time and weekends for two years, I failed four times. On my last trial, I passed all the four courses and obtained the certificate of the USCPA.

Good evening Sir [이름]! Wow! Congratulations! I was inspired after reading your composition. I was able to remember the famous motto of people about life and that is , \"Try and try until you succeed.\" You never gave up despite that you failed for four times. It showed that you can really get what you want. With that kind of attitude, I am sure that you will be able to reach all of your goals in life. You are a determined person and you find ways to reach your dreams. Keep it up! Thank you for sharing this experience to me. I am so proud of you Sir! See you in class! Teacher Nina   It was in January 2010 when the classified advertisement on the daily newspaper by the Accounting Institute drew my attention. >> Correct! >> OR: In January 2010, the Accounting Institute got my attention because of their advertisement on the newspaper . The ad encouraged readers to enroll in the courses to become a US Certified Public Accountant. >> Correct! >> OR The ad encouraged the readers to enroll in some courses to become a US Certified Accountant. At those days, I was just idling days away without doing any particular things but just watching TV. >> In those days, I was just idling without doing any particular things, just watching TV. >> OR: In those days, I was just loitering without doing any particular things just merely watching TV. I, all of sudden, thought that I should not waste time like that, so I called the Institute to check tuition, the duration of the courses, processes to test a CPA exam, etc. >> All of a sudden, I thought that I should not waste time like that so I called the institute to check the tuition fee, the duration of the courses and the processes needed to take the CPA exam. >> OR: All of a sudden, I realized that I should not waste time so I called the institute to know the information needed for me to take the CPA exam, I also gathered more information via Internet about the CPA exam. >> Correct! Since I have not majored in accounting, I had to acquire more than 50 credits in various accounting related subjects to get qualifications to take the exam. >> Since my major was not Accounting, I had to acquire more than fifty credits in various accounting related subject to be qualified to take the exam. So, I went to the institute almost for two years to study and earn the credits. >> So I went to the institute for almost two years to study and earn the credits. >> OR: So I studied and earned credits for almost two years in the institute. Although I devoted most of my personal time and weekends for two years, I failed four times. >> Even though I devoted most of my personal time and weekends for two years in studying, I failed four times. On my last trial, I passed all the four courses and obtained the certificate of the USCPA. >> On my last trial, I passed all of the four courses and obtained a certificate of being a USCPA.