Essay : What are some cultural issues that you have experienced while traveling? Any funny anecdotes
학생이 쓴 원문
When I went to Japan, I experienced cultural difference in a transportation.
For example, One parents didn\'t take care of their child even though He cried endlessly for 2 hours in a bus.
People who take the bus just sigh sometimes, anyone annoyed or got angry about them.
If it happen in korea, I feel that most people may be irritable or say something to them.
Because I had to get distress in a bus in Osaka, I support about korea culture although I received fresh culture shock in there.
Many korean may think people have to be silence in public transportation which is not privacy ownership.
Besides that, People who grew in korea learned from their parents of teacher that they should be gentle to other people.
Thesedays, some parents don\'t care their children because it distract children\'s freedom.
Actually, I don\'t understand their belief but I don\'t have challenge to change their discipline.
I just wish that the parents know their strange belief and change themselves
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Irene ~
When I went to Japan, I experienced cultural difference in a transportation.
>>> When I went to Japan, I experienced a cultural difference in terms of the transportation system.
>>> When I went to Japan, I had an experience about cultural differences while I was in the bus.
For example, One parents didn\'t take care of their child even though He cried endlessly for 2 hours in a bus.
>>> For example, one parent was not mindful of her child who was crying incessantly for 2 hours in the bus.
People who take the bus just sigh sometimes, anyone annoyed or got angry about them.
>>> Some people in the bus just sighed while observing the situation. Some were annoyed or got angry at them.
If it happen in korea, I feel that most people may be irritable or say something to them.
>>> If that happened in Korea, I feel that most people may get irritated or make a comment.
Because I had to get distress in a bus in Osaka, I support about korea culture although I received fresh culture shock in there.
>>> Because of that stressful and shocking experience in Osaka, I am much thankful of the Korean culture.
Many korean may think people have to be silence in public transportation which is not privacy ownership.
>>> Many Koreans believe that we should stay quiet in public places because we are with other people.
Besides that, People who grew in korea learned from their parents of teacher that they should be gentle to other people.
>>> Aside from that, Koreans were taught by their parents or teachers that they should be mindful of other people\'s privacy.
These days, some parents don\'t care their children because it distract children\'s freedom.
>>> These days, Korean parents give their children more freedom.
Actually, I don\'t understand their belief but I don\'t have challenge to change their discipline.
>>> Actually, I don\'t understand their belief but I don\'t want to challenge or try to change their was of disciplining kids.
I just wish that the parents know their strange belief and change themselves.
>>> I just hope that these parents will realize their own mistakes and change for the better.
~ Teacher Irene ~
When I went to Japan, I experienced cultural difference in a transportation.
>>> When I went to Japan, I experienced a cultural difference in terms of the transportation system.
>>> When I went to Japan, I had an experience about cultural differences while I was in the bus.
For example, One parents didn\'t take care of their child even though He cried endlessly for 2 hours in a bus.
>>> For example, one parent was not mindful of her child who was crying incessantly for 2 hours in the bus.
People who take the bus just sigh sometimes, anyone annoyed or got angry about them.
>>> Some people in the bus just sighed while observing the situation. Some were annoyed or got angry at them.
If it happen in korea, I feel that most people may be irritable or say something to them.
>>> If that happened in Korea, I feel that most people may get irritated or make a comment.
Because I had to get distress in a bus in Osaka, I support about korea culture although I received fresh culture shock in there.
>>> Because of that stressful and shocking experience in Osaka, I am much thankful of the Korean culture.
Many korean may think people have to be silence in public transportation which is not privacy ownership.
>>> Many Koreans believe that we should stay quiet in public places because we are with other people.
Besides that, People who grew in korea learned from their parents of teacher that they should be gentle to other people.
>>> Aside from that, Koreans were taught by their parents or teachers that they should be mindful of other people\'s privacy.
These days, some parents don\'t care their children because it distract children\'s freedom.
>>> These days, Korean parents give their children more freedom.
Actually, I don\'t understand their belief but I don\'t have challenge to change their discipline.
>>> Actually, I don\'t understand their belief but I don\'t want to challenge or try to change their was of disciplining kids.
I just wish that the parents know their strange belief and change themselves.
>>> I just hope that these parents will realize their own mistakes and change for the better.
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