ESSAY: What are some of your favorite motivational quotes? Do you have any motivational quotes or ma
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My favorite essential quotes is \"trust be yourself\" that l learned from my parents.
My parents always remind me that I can do anything if you beilieve your potential ability.
Thanks to that, I can do everything with confidence based on my family\'s spirit.
For example, I can not swim because of trauma in the past.
However, when I was a university student, I had to pass swim test for get a good score.
I tried to overcome the water trauma. Finally, I can swim well and get a score what I want.
It is important possitive experience for me to believe my parent\'s lesson.
After that, not having the quote alone, but also notifying the lesson to others who need to prove their confidence.
Thesedays, I\'d like to get a good score for some test. I think that it is difficult for me, but I believe that I would be do it that I want.
Thanks to read my essay
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Hello Kelly! Thanks for answering this topic question. ^_^ It\'s a good practice.
~T. Irene~
My favorite essential quotes is \"trust be yourself\" that l learned from my parents.
>>> My favorite essential quote that I learned from my parents is \"trust yourself\" or \"be yourself\".
My parents always remind me that I can do anything if you beilieve your potential ability.
>>> My parents always remind me that I can do anything if I believe in my own potentials or abilities.
Thanks to that, I can do everything with confidence based on my family\'s spirit.
>>> Thanks to that, I can do everything with confidence.
For example, I can not swim because of trauma in the past.
>>> For example, I could not swim because of a trauma in the past.
However, when I was a university student, I had to pass swim test for get a good score.
>>> However, when I was a university student, I had to get a good score in the swimming test.
I tried to overcome the water trauma.
>> I tried to overcome my trauma in the water.
Finally, I can swim well and get a score what I want.
>>> Finally, I can swim well now and I got a good score in the test.
It is important possitive experience for me to believe my parent\'s lesson.
>>> It was a positive benefit for me to have followed my parents\' advice.
After that, not having the quote alone, but also notifying the lesson to others who need to prove their confidence.
>>> After that, I don\'t only keep this quote to myself but I also share it with other people who need confidence.
These days, I\'d like to get a good score for some test.
>>> These days, I\'d like to get good scores from the tests I\'m doing.
I think that it is difficult for me, but I believe that I would be do it that I want.
>>> I think that it is difficult for me, but I believe that I would be able to do what I want to do.
Thanks to read my essay
>>> Thanks for reading my essay.
~T. Irene~
My favorite essential quotes is \"trust be yourself\" that l learned from my parents.
>>> My favorite essential quote that I learned from my parents is \"trust yourself\" or \"be yourself\".
My parents always remind me that I can do anything if you beilieve your potential ability.
>>> My parents always remind me that I can do anything if I believe in my own potentials or abilities.
Thanks to that, I can do everything with confidence based on my family\'s spirit.
>>> Thanks to that, I can do everything with confidence.
For example, I can not swim because of trauma in the past.
>>> For example, I could not swim because of a trauma in the past.
However, when I was a university student, I had to pass swim test for get a good score.
>>> However, when I was a university student, I had to get a good score in the swimming test.
I tried to overcome the water trauma.
>> I tried to overcome my trauma in the water.
Finally, I can swim well and get a score what I want.
>>> Finally, I can swim well now and I got a good score in the test.
It is important possitive experience for me to believe my parent\'s lesson.
>>> It was a positive benefit for me to have followed my parents\' advice.
After that, not having the quote alone, but also notifying the lesson to others who need to prove their confidence.
>>> After that, I don\'t only keep this quote to myself but I also share it with other people who need confidence.
These days, I\'d like to get a good score for some test.
>>> These days, I\'d like to get good scores from the tests I\'m doing.
I think that it is difficult for me, but I believe that I would be do it that I want.
>>> I think that it is difficult for me, but I believe that I would be able to do what I want to do.
Thanks to read my essay
>>> Thanks for reading my essay.
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