Essay: What are the highlights of your trip?

Amazing story! I would love to visit those places one day. 

I\'m very much interested on your experience on this CES 2020 exhibit. 

I wonder how it will change how the technology is nowadays. 

As always, great composition again, Mr. [이름]. 

I\'m looking forward to our next class.

Keep up the great work and have a wonderful week ahead.

~Teacher Eve.    

I had a lot of interesting experiences in this trip.

>> I had a lot of interesting experiences during my trip.
 Among them, I choose the following two as my highlights. 

>> Correct!

>> OR: Among them, I\'m choosing a couple as my highlights.
 The first one is future technologies.

>> The first one is about the future technologies.
 The CES (Consumer Electronics Shows) 2020 exhibits a variety of gadgets including flexible display, intelligent robot, flying car, and devices for smart home and city. 

>> Correct!
 I actually attended an exhibition that is driving a off-road car based on the VR/AR (Virtual Reality/Augmented Reality) technology.

>>  I actually attended an exhibition that is driving an off-road car based on the VR/AR (Virtual Reality/Augmented Reality) technology.
 I wore an HMD (Head Mounted Display) that shows an mountain area and drove a car in that area where I turned a wheel which leads to change views in the HMD accordingly. 

>> I wore an HMD (Head Mounted Display) that shows a mountain area and I drove a car in that area where I turn the wheels that leads to a change of view in the HMD accordingly.
 The second highlight is the attractiveness of the city, Lag Vegas.

>>  The second highlight is the attractiveness of the city, Las Vegas.

>> OR: The second highlight is about how attractive the city of Las Vegas is.
 There are many gorgeous hotels and delicious restaurants such as little Italy and Mon Ami Gabi.

>> Correct!
 In addition, it has spacious deserts and lonely mountains.

>> Correct!
 Especially I like the Joshua tree that is an amazing tree in a desert.

>> Especially the Joshua tree, that was an amazing tree in the desert.