ESSAY: What are you greatest pet peeves?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are diverse things that make people annoying.
Typical examples include arrogance, selfishness, dishonesty, incompetence, unrighteousness ans so on.
For me, the greatest pet peeve is skewness.
If someone goes to one direction too much, that makes me unbearable.
For instance, A is mad at B since B is incapable of something. But, B probably has some reasons for that.
On the other hand, if someone goes for something too much, it might become a kind of obsession.
As every bright thing has its own shadow, every ugly-looking thing could have a light deep inside.
I think everything has both a negative and positive aspect and want to balance between them.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jon Moo. Thank you for this. There is indeed a reason for everything and everything has its good and bad side.
- T. Beth
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There are diverse things that make people annoying.>>> There are diverse things that make people annoyed.
Typical examples include arrogance, selfishness, dishonesty, incompetence, unrighteousness ans so on.
>>> Typical examples include arrogance, selfishness, dishonesty, incompetence, unrighteousness and so on.
For me, the greatest pet peeve is skewness.
>>> correct
If someone goes to one direction too much, that makes me unbearable.
If someone goes to one direction too much, that makes me unbearable.
>>> If someone goes to one direction too much, that is unbearable for me.
For instance, A is mad at B since B is incapable of something.
>>> correct
But, B probably has some reasons for that.
>>> correct
On the other hand, if someone goes for something too much, it might become a kind of obsession.
On the other hand, if someone goes for something too much, it might become a kind of obsession.
>>> correct
As every bright thing has its own shadow, every ugly-looking thing could have a light deep inside.
As every bright thing has its own shadow, every ugly-looking thing could have a light deep inside.
>>> correct
I think everything has both a negative and positive aspect and want to balance between them.
I think everything has both a negative and positive aspect and want to balance between them.
>>> I think everything has both a negative and positive aspect and want a balance between them.
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