ESSAY: What changes are you making this year?

I thought this question was the easiest by far, but it\'s great that you said it\'s refreshing.

3 MORE DAYS TILL NEW YEAR!

Great composition as always, Mr. [이름] and I hope you you fulfill your resolution by the end of the year.

See you in class!

~Teacher Eve.

This is one of the toughest questions I have ever gotten for essay.

>> This is one of the toughest questions I have ever gotten for an essay.
 In fact, I don\'t think about what I want to change this year until now, even though today is already Jan. 22th. 

>> In fact, I don\'t think about what I want to change this year until now, even though today is already Jan. 22nd. 

>> OR: In fact, I haven\'t thought of the changes I want this year, up until now, even though today is already Jan. 22nd.
 I just think that this year consists of another days like those of the last year and I do my best to do what is given to me same as what I did in last year. 

>> I just think that this year consists of days as last year and I continue to do my best as last year.
 But, the question refreshes my mind and drives me to rethink about how to make this year unlike to the previous ones.

>> Correct!
 It may sound funny that one thing what I want to do this year is hanging on an iron bar more than 30 seconds.

>> It may sound funny but what I want to do this year is to hang on an iron bar for more than 30 seconds.
 Currently, I can hang on an iron bar around 10 seconds.

>> Correct!
 To lengthen the time, I have to enhance the strength of my arms by doing push-ups or lifting.

>> Correct!
 In addition, I have to lose my weight to reduce the effect of gravity.

>>  In addition, I have to lose my weight to reduce the effect of the gravity.
 My plan is extending the time 5 seconds per each two months, hopefully hanging on more than 40 seconds on the last day of this year.

>> My plan is to extend the time 5 seconds per each two months, hopefully hanging on more than 40 seconds on the last day of this year.
 I also want to do normal (not funny) things such as studying or making friends.

>> Correct!