ESSAY: What did you realize while staying in USA while the pandemic is ongoing?
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When the COVID-19 had began around the Asian country, I was so frustrated that Americans didn\'t believe that they could be threatened by it at all. They ignored to wear mask nor make a distance each other. Even U.S. government ensured they will be okay. However, as it spread out in Washington state first, and U.S. government announced the situation would become serious, people freaked out. They went to groceries and swept all the paper towels, breads, milks, eggs, and water. And people locked down their house, were afraid of going outside. But after a month, even if the virus was spreading out rapidly all over the nation, people started to ignore it. They went outside, hung out together, went to the beach, lake or wherever they can have fun. And they didn\'t wear a mask at all. They hated to wear it. The consequence is so bad as we know. now U.S has over 5 millions confirmed cases which is 1/4 number of cases all over the world. People started wear a mask now, but I guess it\'s too late.
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What did you realize while staying in USA while the pandemic is ongoing?
When the COVID-19 had began around the Asian country, I was so frustrated that Americans didn\'t believe that they could be threatened by it at all.
>>> CORRECT
They ignored to wear mask nor make a distance each other.
>>> They ignored to wear masks nor maintain a safe distance from each other.
Even U.S. government ensured they will be okay.
>>> Even the U.S. government ensured that they will be okay.
However, as it spread out in Washington state first, and U.S. government announced the situation would become serious, people freaked out.
>>> However, as it spread out first in the state of Washington, the U.S. government announced that the situation would become serious, then the people freaked out.
They went to groceries and swept all the paper towels, breads, milks, eggs, and water.
>>> They went to groceries and swept all the paper towels, bread, milk, eggs, and water.
And people locked down their house, were afraid of going outside.
>>> And people locked their house and they were afraid of going outside.
But after a month, even if the virus was spreading out rapidly all over the nation, people started to ignore it.
>>> CORRECT
They went outside, hung out together, went to the beach, lake or wherever they can have fun.
>>> CORRECT
And they didn\'t wear a mask at all. They hated to wear it.
>>> They didn\'t wear a mask at all; they hated to wear it.
The consequence is so bad as we know. now
>>> The consequence ended so bad as we all know.
U.S has over 5 millions confirmed cases which is 1/4 number of cases all over the world.
>>> Now the U.S has over 5 million confirmed cases which is 1/4 of the number of cases all over the world.
People started wear a mask now, but I guess it\'s too late.
>>> At present, people started to wear a mask, but I guess it\'s already too late.
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