ESSAY: What do you like about the Christmas holiday?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are various types of holidays in Korea.
One type is the conventional holiday such as Lunar New Year\'s Day, Thanksgiving Day and Children\'s Day.
Another type is the national holiday including Liberation Day, Memorial Day and Korean Alphabet Day.
Holidays are good to me since I can take a rest without going for a work.
In addition, I can commemorate special events such as movements for independence on the Liberation Day and family gathering on the Thanksgiving Day.
By the way, the Christmas is a unique holiday.
It is not only a religiously meaningful day when the Jesus was born, but also a significant day that we can share our love.
It is a time of God showing his great love for us.
Besides, it is a good opportunity to take care of our neighbors, healing our society.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir Jong Moo. Thank you for this. Christmas is indeed a time for giving. Like the song says, \"give love on Christmas day.\"
- T. Beth
=============================
There are various types of holidays in Korea.>>> correct
One type is the conventional holiday such as Lunar New Year\'s Day, Thanksgiving Day and Children\'s Day.
One type is the conventional holiday such as Lunar New Year\'s Day, Thanksgiving Day and Children\'s Day.
>>> correct
Another type is the national holiday including Liberation Day, Memorial Day and Korean Alphabet Day.
Another type is the national holiday including Liberation Day, Memorial Day and Korean Alphabet Day.
>>> correct
Holidays are good to me since I can take a rest without going for a work.
Holidays are good to me since I can take a rest without going for a work.
>>> Holidays are good to me since I can take a rest without going to work.
In addition, I can commemorate special events such as movements for independence on the Liberation Day and family gathering on the Thanksgiving Day.
>>> correct
By the way, the Christmas is a unique holiday.
By the way, the Christmas is a unique holiday.
>>> correct
It is not only a religiously meaningful day when the Jesus was born, but also a significant day that we can share our love.
It is not only a religiously meaningful day when the Jesus was born, but also a significant day that we can share our love.
>>> It is not only a religiously meaningful day when Jesus was born, but also a significant day where we can share our love.
It is a time of God showing his great love for us.
>>> correct
Besides, it is a good opportunity to take care of our neighbors, healing our society.
>>> correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.