ESSAY: What do you like in a teacher?

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. I am glad that your teacher inspires and helps you in class. Continue to make your teacher proud of you.

Enjoy the rest of your day.

~Teacher Eve

ESSAY:
What do you like in a teacher?
I think teacher is very kind. 
>> Correct.

She wait me to say words very freindly.

>> DID YOU MEAN: She gives me time to speak and she is very friendly.

She give me some advices. So l can fix my announcement.

>> DID YOU MEAN: She give me some advice so I could improve my pronunciation.

She is very good teacher for me.

>> She is a very good teacher for me.

l always can smile in this class.

>> I always smile in this class.

l want to have class with her a long time

>> I want to study with her for a long time.