Essay: What does a holiday mean to you?

That\'s a cool metaphor you\'ve used, [이름] [이름]. I like it. 

You\'re definitely right! 

The more holidays we have, the more we\'ll shine. It is our duty.

This is a good composition, as always. 

I\'m looking forward to seeing you in our next classes!

~Teacher Eve.    

Holiday make me better than past weekdays

>> Holidays makes me better than weekdays.
 Because we can use whole 24 hour what we want. 

>> Because we can use the whole 24 hours to do whatever we want.
 That means is I can choose develop something for me or relieve the stress with what I like.

>> That means I can choose to develop something for me or to relieve stress with whatever I like.
 it’s like a R.P.G(role playing game)

>> Like R.P.G (Role Playing Game)
 We have each own character who lives for 100 years.

>> We have our own characters who lives for 100 years.
 And we i think about how do i train this characters

>> And we think about how to train these characters.
 In the first, we want to more grow up than now state. and we decide encountered to various situation.

>> At first, we want to grow up more than our current state and we decide how to encounter various situations.
 We get E.X.P(EXperience Point) through experience many ordeal.

>> We get E.X.P (Experience Point) through many experiences which is an ordeal.
 that is surely more stronger than get E.X.P before

>> That is surely stronger than getting an E.X.P.
 but if you skip or forgot break time, our characters become lose their mind, and get sick. 

>> But if you skip or forgot to take a break, our characters lose their mind and get sick.
 After all our characters are died and we can see this phrase

>> After all, our characters die and we can see this phrase...
 To be continue? 9..8..like this

>> \"To be continued? 9..8..\" like this.
 Game just can put in the coin and to be continue the game but we are not

>> With games, we can just put in a coin and continue, but we are not.
 I just use a simple metaphor though, i think holiday is crucial factor of reality life. it\'s same too

>> I\'m just using a simple metaphor though. I think holiday is a crucial factor of our real life, it\'s the same too.
 we have to enjoying our holiday. we have a duty

>> We have to enjoy our holiday. We have a duty.
 And if we have a fully holiday, we gonna more shining

>> And if we have a full holiday, we\'re going to shine more.