Essay: What exciting things are you trying this year?
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Oh nooo, I will miss you, [이름] [이름], but yes, take your time to get everything ready.
Thank you for doing your homework today before you take a break.
Hoping for a prosperous week for you!
We only live once, therefore I support your dream of surfing one day.
Hope to talk to you in our class soon!
~Teacher Eve.
I want to try to surfing, that is I have been dreamed one things of bucket list
>> I want to try surfing, that is what I have been dreaming of and one of the things in my bucket list.
what a fancy!
>> Correct!
I always imagine in my mind, my surfing board split the wave and i standing there.
>> I always imagine in my mind, my surfing board split the wave and I\'m standing there
when if i\\\'m ride surfing board someday, I want to be good surfer so i practice land surf using my skateboard even i don\\\'t have surf board
>> When I ride my surfing board someday, I want to be a good surfer, so I practice surfing on land using my skateboard.
Well, i know, this happening is a very funny.
>> Well, I know that when this happens, it will be very funny.
but i think that kind of things necessary to our life, although it\\\'s looks like silly
>> But I think that these kinds of things are necessary in our life, even though it looks silly.
and my second list is living other country at least 3 month
>> And the second list is living in other countries for at least 3 months.
i want to experience another culture and language
>> Correct!
that is quite exciting thing for my lazy brain
>> That is quite exciting for my lazy brain.
P.s
>> Correct!
Hi eve
>> Correct!
I told you my desktop broken, and i will want to fix it today or tomorrow
>> I told you my desktop was broken, and I want to fix it today or tomorrow.
but it\\\'s need time might 3 or 4 day...
>> but it might take time, 3 or 4 days.
so I will be likely to take a break our class a while
>> So I will likely take a break from our class for a while.
I\'m so sorry eve :O
>> Correct!
see you maybe next week!
>> Correct!
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