Essay: What exciting things are you trying this year?

2020-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Eve

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to try to surfing, that is I have been dreamed one things of bucket list what a fancy! I always imagine in my mind, my surfing board split the wave and i standing there. when if i\\\'m ride surfing board someday, I want to be good surfer so i practice land surf using my skateboard even i don\\\'t have surf board Well, i know, this happening is a very funny. but i think that kind of things necessary to our life, although it\\\'s looks like silly and my second list is living other country at least 3 month i want to experience another culture and language that is quite exciting thing for my lazy brain P.s Hi eve I told you my desktop broken, and i will want to fix it today or tomorrow but it\\\'s need time might 3 or 4 day... so I will be likely to take a break our class a while I\'m so sorry eve :O see you maybe next week!

강사 첨삭

Oh nooo, I will miss you, [이름] [이름], but yes, take your time to get everything ready.

Thank you for doing your homework today before you take a break.

Hoping for a prosperous week for you!

We only live once, therefore I support your dream of surfing one day.

Hope to talk to you in our class soon!

~Teacher Eve.

I want to try to surfing, that is I have been dreamed one things of bucket list

>> I want to try surfing, that is what I have been dreaming of and one of the things in my bucket list.
 what a fancy!

>> Correct!
 I always imagine in my mind, my surfing board split the wave and i standing there.

>> I always imagine in my mind, my surfing board split the wave and I\'m standing there
 when if i\\\'m ride surfing board someday, I want to be good surfer so i practice land surf using my skateboard even i don\\\'t have surf board

>> When I ride my surfing board someday, I want to be a good surfer, so I practice surfing on land using my skateboard.
 Well, i know, this happening is a very funny.

>> Well, I know that when this happens, it will be very funny.
 but i think that kind of things necessary to our life, although it\\\'s looks like silly

>> But I think that these kinds of things are necessary in our life, even though it looks silly.
 and my second list is living other country at least 3 month

>> And the second list is living in other countries for at least 3 months.
 i want to experience another culture and language

>> Correct!
 that is quite exciting thing for my lazy brain
>> That is quite exciting for my lazy brain.


 P.s

>> Correct!
 Hi eve

>> Correct!
 I told you my desktop broken, and i will want to fix it today or tomorrow

>>  I told you my desktop was broken, and I want to fix it today or tomorrow.
 but it\\\'s need time might 3 or 4 day...

>> but it might take time, 3 or 4 days.
 so I will be likely to take a break our class a while

>> So I will likely take a break from our class for a while.
 I\'m so sorry eve :O

>> Correct!
 see you maybe next week!

>> Correct!

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