ESSAY: What foods do you like to eat when you are happy?

I like to eat charcoal fire grill when I were happy.It tastes really good.Actually,I like most of the meat.Charcoal fire grill,steak and barbeque is very delicious.One of my best meat is charcoal fire grill.It is very warm.My best restaurant is charcoal fire grill restaurant too.It's condiment is very sweet.I want eat very expesive and famous food. <Taekwondo> Taekwondo is Korea's sport.Many people learn taek-won do.I am a black belt.I had Taewondo lesson for 3 year.I quite a taekwondo lesson now.I think Teaekwondo is a little hard exercise.I am proud of me because I am a black belt.

Hi [이름]!   Happy Thursday! Its great that you can still find time to answer your homework despite your busy schedule. I am very pleased with your diligence in answering your homework. Your composition was great however, you have to review your usage of linking verbs and your adjectives. Eating barbecue also makes me happy. So when I eat barbecue when I am already happy, I get even happier! I applaud you for being able to master a difficult sport such as Taekwondo. I wish I had studied martial arts too! Study well and keep safe. See you tomorrow.   -T. Liza       I like to eat charcoal fire grill when I were happy. >>I like to eat charcoal fire grilled food when I am happy. >>OR: When I am happy, I like to eat grilled food. It tastes really good. >>CORRECT >>OR: It is very delicious. Actually,I like most of the meat. >>Actually, I like meat the most. >>OR: Actually, meat is my favorite food. Charcoal fire grill,steak and barbeque is very delicious. >>Charcoal fire grilled steak and barbecue is very delicious. >>Grilled steak and barbecue is very delicious. One of my best meat is charcoal fire grill. >>One of the best meats is charcoal fire grilled. >>OR: Charcoal fire grilled meat is one of the best food. It is very warm. >>CORRECT My best restaurant is charcoal fire grill restaurant too. >>For me, the best restaurant is a charcoal fire grill restaurant too. It\'s condiment is very sweet. >>The condiment is very sweet. >>The sauce is very sweet. I want eat very expesive and famous food. >>I want to eat very expensive and famous foods.   <Taekwondo> Taekwondo is Korea\'s sport. >>CORRECT >>OR: Taekwondo is Korea\'s national sport. Many people learn taek-won do. >>CORRECT I am a black belt. >>I am a black belter in Taekwondo. I had Taewondo lesson for 3 year. >>I had Taekwondo lessons for 3 years. I quite a taekwondo lesson now. >>I quit from my Taekwondo lessons now. >>OR: I\'ve stopped taking Taekwondo classes now. I think Teaekwondo is a little hard exercise. >>I think Taekwondo is a little hard. >>OR: I think Taekwondo exercises are a bit hard. I am proud of me because I am a black belt. >>I am proud of myself because I am a black belter.