Essay: What have you lost while traveling?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most unforgettable thing that I have lost while traveling was my suitcase.
It happened when I traveled to Atlanta.
At that time, I booked two airplanes, one is from Seoul to L.A. and the other from L.A to Atlanta, meaning that I needed to transfer at L.A.
By the way, there was something wrong at L.A. and my suitcase did not arrived at Atlanta on time.
Fortunately, I could receive my suitcase three days later, but during that period, I didn\'t have any daily necessaries.
Even I didn\'t have any clothes to change. To make matters worse, the weather was terrible hot.
I had no other [이름]ce but buying new ones.
I argued with the airplane manager who said that he would compensate for my purchasing.
But until now, I don\'t get anything from the airplane company. :-(
강사 첨삭
Hello Jong Mu. Thank you for this. That was quite an experience you had there. What a nuisance! Good thing you got it back.
- T. Beth
---------------------------------
The most unforgettable thing that I have lost while traveling was my suitcase.>>>> correct
It happened when I traveled to Atlanta.
It happened when I traveled to Atlanta.
>>>> correct
At that time, I booked two airplanes, one is from Seoul to L.A. and the other from L.A to Atlanta, meaning that I needed to transfer at L.A.
At that time, I booked two airplanes, one is from Seoul to L.A. and the other from L.A to Atlanta, meaning that I needed to transfer at L.A.
>>>> At that time, I booked two airplanes, one is from Seoul to L.A. and the other from L.A to Atlanta. Meaning, I needed to transfer at L.A.
By the way, there was something wrong at L.A. and my suitcase did not arrived at Atlanta on time.
>>>> By the way, there was something wrong at L.A. and my suitcase did not arrive in Atlanta on time.
Fortunately, I could receive my suitcase three days later, but during that period, I didn\'t have any daily necessaries.
>>>> Fortunately, I could receive my suitcase three days later, but during that period, I didn\'t have any daily necessities.
Even I didn\'t have any clothes to change.
>>>> I didn\'t even have any clothes to change with.
To make matters worse, the weather was terrible hot.
>>>> To make matters worse, the weather was terribly hot.
I had no other [이름]ce but buying new ones.
>>>> correct
I argued with the airplane manager who said that he would compensate for my purchasing.
I argued with the airplane manager who said that he would compensate for my purchasing.
>>>> correct
But until now, I don\'t get anything from the airplane company.
But until now, I don\'t get anything from the airplane company.
>>>> But until now, I haven\'t gotten anything from the airplane company.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.