ESSAY: What is most likely to bring about the extinction of the human race? How can it be avoided?

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~ Teacher Irene~

These days, the world has been going through endanger in massive extinction of human race.
>>> These days, the world is going through  a massive extinction of the human race.
This essay will examine the main cause of the human extinction and possible solution to this problem.
>>> This essay will examine the main cause of human extinction and a possible solution to this problem.
 The main cause is over-exploitation of natural resources and severe air pollution.
>>> Correct.
There is a strong relation between natural habitat and human.
>>> There is a strong relationship between nature and humans.
When activities connected with harvesting and capturing a natural resource are too intense in a particular area, the resources become died out.
>>> When activities such as harvesting and using of natural resources are concentrated in a particular area, the resources die out.
To give an example, too frequent fishing does not leave for fish enough time to reproduce and makes them disappear.
>>> To give an example, too frequent fishing does not allow fishes enough time to reproduce and replenish their number. This will actually make them disappear for good.
As a result of this, human is not be able to acquire provisions for living.
>>> As a result of this, humans cannot maintain the provisions needed to support their needs. 
Thus, human activities deplete local flora and fauna and cause extinctions themselves.
>>> Thus, we can claim that human activities do deplete local flora and fauna that may result to the extinction of species. 
 Some possible solution to this problemis pretecting natural areas.
>>>  One possible solution to this problem is protecting natural reserves.
By avoiding overexploitation of its resources, we can save ourselves as well as natural species from danger of extinction.
>>> By avoiding over-exploitation of resources, we can save ourselves as well as the other species from the danger of extinction.