Essay: What is the greatest lesson you\'ve learned last year?
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Wow! Amazing story!
Thank you so much for sharing, Mr. [이름].
I also learned a lesson by reading your composition today.
I definitely agree with your last statement about going back to the basics.
Keep up the great work!
I\'m looking forward to more compositions from you. :D
~Teacher Eve.
It happened last May.
>> Correct!
The weather was hot even though it wasn\'t summer yet.
>> Correct!
I don\'t remember exactly why, but I was exhausted at that time.
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Probably it was because I had lots of things to do or I just felt spring fatigue which made me feel down, being melancholy.
>>Probably it was because I had lots of things to do or I just felt a spring fatigue which made me feel down and melancholy.
One day I was scheduled to have a counseling with a student.
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FYI, my school has a system that associates students with his/her adviser and makes it a rule to have a counseling regularly.
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We had ordinary conversations such as \"What is your favorite stuff?\" and \"What is your plan after graduation?\",
>> We had an ordinary conversations such as \"What is your favorite stuff?\" and \"What is your plan after graduation?\"
but I didn\'t have any energy in this talk.
>> But I didn\'t have any energy during this talk.
Suddenly, the student asked \"what was your dream when you were young?\"
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I answered, \"Well, I want to be a teacher\".
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He remarked \"Wow, you make your dream. You are definitely happy now\".
>> He remarked \"Wow, you\'ve achieved your dream. You are definitely happy now\".
The remark hits me like a thunder and threw my fatigue away.
>> That remark hits me like a thunder and threw my fatigue away.
Often we forget what is important to us especially when we\'re accustomed to it.
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\"Going back to basics\" is one of lessons I\'ve learned last year.
>> Correct!
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