Essay: What is the greatest lesson you\'ve learned last year?

HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Awesome composition to start of the year, [이름] [이름].

Thank you for doing your homework today.

You have been amazing so far and I definitely agree with your statement of overcoming your fear.

We only live once, so let\'s live everyday as if it\'s our last. That means to say we have to continually enjoy our life without regrets.

See you in class!

~Teacher Eve.

at last year, i feel screaming my body

>> Last year, my body felt like screaming.
 because i didn\'t any exercise and i had trouble posture.

>> Because I haven\'t done any exercises and I had trouble with my posture.
 so i decided to learn swim, fortunately i live in nearby indoor swimming academy.

>> So I decided to learn how to swim, fortunately, I live nearby the indoor swimming academy.
 i could enroll in afternoon swim class on time

>> I could enroll for the afternoon swimming class.
 In all honesty, To learn swimming is a big challenge to me

>> In all honesty, learning how to swim is a big challenge for me.
 I learned swimming very long time ago, so i don\'t remember anything about the swim, so I\'m not good at swimming as so far

>> I learned swimming a long time ago, so I don\'t remember anything about swimming, so I\'m not good at swimming so far.
 and additionally i had a little of water phobia.

>> And additionally, I had a little bit of a water phobia.
 i have worried about that, on the other hand i wanted to overcome this fear

>> I was worried about that, but I want to overcome this fear.
 when I had first lesson, My goal is To be not drown the water.

>> When I had my first lesson, my goal was not to drown.
 and I succeed!

>> And I succeeded!
 i still thank for that succeed otherwise i wouldn\'t be able to write this essay

>> I was so thankful I succeeded, otherwise, I wouldn\'t be able to write this essay.
 i had lesson to swimming class and i survived each everyday

>> I had lessons in swimming class and I survived everyday.
 3 mouth later i\'m became pretty good beginner.

>>3 months later, I became a pretty good beginner
at least, i\'m not became drowner.

>> At least, I\'m not a person who keeps drowning.
it was good sign for me.

>> Correct!
 i got recover confidence what i\'m doing

>> I was able to recover my confidence in what I do. 
 and that effect spread out in my whole life

>> And that result affected my whole life.
 i got back vitality and happiness of living

>> I got back the vitality and the happiness in living.