ESSAY: What is the worst punishment you could think of?

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I definitely like what you\'ve written for your last statement, though we don\'t understand what happening anymore, we\'re still hopeful for a better future. 

And that\'s called faith. 

You\'ve expressed yourself so well again on this essay. 

See you in class!

~Teacher Eve.    

The meaning of punishment is someone did a crime in our society

>> The meaning of punishment is when someone did a crime in our society.
 and criminals punished according to nature of crime

>> And criminals are punished according to the nature of their crime.
 my opinion of this question is punishment that criminals can\'t regret for themselves

>> My opinion for this question is punishments are done for criminals who are not able to feel regret for themselves.
 because real function of punishment is we can self-reflection, is that light or heavy

>> Because the real function of punishment is for self-reflection, whether it\'s light or heavy.
 That makes us better, this is the key, we can apply this to everything.

>> Correct!
 We can\'t find the correct route at one time, we must experience fail then modify the route again and again.

>> We can\'t find the correct route at one time, we must experience failure before we modify the route again and again.
 We learn from failure.

>> Correct!

>> OR: We learn from our mistakes.
 But if punishment can\'t link crime to regret, The criminal must will be doing it again that they did it.

>> But if the punishment can\'t link crimes to regret, the criminal will be doing his crimes again.
 For example, torture that can\'t be think about anything, like that

>> For example, torture without reflection.
 and if it\'s usually happening over and over again, we won\'t trust anymore other people, furthermore our society

>> And if it\'s usually happening over and over again, we wouldn\'t be able to trust other people and our society.
 This is absolutely error of our social system.

>> This is an absolute error of our social system.
 Sometimes I saw this unjustified system and i still can\'t understand that.

>> Sometimes whenever I saw this unjustified system, I still can\'t understand it.
 So I feel hopeless for everything but the other hand, I still believe that we changing a tiny little bit

>> So I feel hopeless about everything, but on the other hand, I still believe that we are changing a tiny bit.