Essay: what would you want to take when you move to another country?

If I planned to stay somewhere in another country away from my home for a year, I would like to take a first aid kit which contains household medicines like pain killers, cold medicine, ointments and anti-biotic dermal creams if allowed by customs authorities of the country where I will stay. One of the toughest times while you stay overseas is when you are sick. In an emergency case, the household medicines will be of great help to relieve pain or sometimes to cure the disease you are suffering from. In some countries, it is not easy for you to get a prescription to buy such medicines or it could be very expensive. Moreover, the medicines you brought from your country could work much better than the ones you get in a foreign country because the local medicines have been developed mainly for your local people and validated in your country. In my case, I often suffer from skin ailments because my skin is sensitive to dry climates, so the antibiotic dermal cream is a must to carry.

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If I planned to stay somewhere in another country away from my home for a year, I would like to take a first aid kit which contains household medicines like pain killers, cold medicine, ointments and antibiotic dermal creams if allowed by customs authorities of the country where I will stay.

>> If I will stay somewhere in another country for a year,  I would like to take a first aid kit which contains household medicines like pain killers, cold medicine, ointments and antibiotic dermal creams if the custom authorities will allow it.

One of the toughest times while you stay overseas is when you are sick.

>> Correct!

OR>> One of the toughest times when you are staying overseas is when you are sick.

In an emergency case, the household medicines will be of great help to relieve pain or sometimes to cure the disease you are suffering from.

>> Correct!

OR>>  In emergency cases, the household medicines will be of great help to relieve pain or sometimes to cure the disease you are suffering from.

In some countries, it is not easy for you to get a prescription to buy such medicines or it could be very expensive.

>> Correct!

Moreover, the medicines you brought from your country could work much better than the ones you get in a foreign country because the local medicines have been developed mainly for your local people and validated in your country.

>> Moreover, the medicines you brought from your country could work much better than the ones you can get in a foreign country because the local medicines have been developed mainly for your local people and validated in your country.

In my case, I often suffer from skin ailments because my skin is sensitive to dry climates, so the antibiotic dermal cream is a must to carry.

>>  Correct!