(Essay) Where is your hometown? Is your hometown famous for anything?
학생이 쓴 원문
I was born in Sindang-dong, Seoul, Korea.
My town is famous for Tteok-bokki.
Teok-bokki is Korean food and stir-fried rice cakes :)
Many restaurants is located in the one street.
Almost Korean know that street.
I lived in Sindang-dong, so I ate tteok-bokki a lot.
That is why I like it so much.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]! Thank you for telling me about your hometown. Food is very important to cultures. I am glad to know that food represents your hometown. Have a good day! ~T.Dee
My town is famous for Tteok-bokki.
>>CORRECT!
Teok-bokki is Korean food and stir-fried rice cakes :)
>>Teok-bokki is a Korean dish which is a stir-fried rice cakes.
Many restaurants is located in the one street.
>>Many restaurants is located in the one street.
Almost Korean know that street.
>>Almost all Koreans know that street.
I lived in Sindang-dong, so I ate tteok-bokki a lot.
>>CORRECT!
That is why I like it so much.
>>CORRECT!
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