(Essay) Which region of your country has the best weather? What is it like there?
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I think most region\'s weather is same except snow. In south, there\'s less snow and north there\'s much snow. I live near Busan, so I saw little snow but when I lived at Seoul there\'s too much snow. I love snow, so i was happy. It\'s really beautiful.
I want to talk about my country\'s best scenery region instead. It\'s Jeju island! I really love Jeju island. In Jeju island there\'s emerald color sea and beep blue sky. It\'s so wonderful. I love sea much. So, when summer come, I often go Jeju island and swim in the sea. In this year I coudn\'t go to Jeju island so i miss it too much.
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I think most region\'s weather is same except snow.
>>I think, most regions in my country have the same weather except during winter.
In south, there\'s less snow and north there\'s much snow.
>>In the southern region, there is less snow while in the northern area there\'s so much snow.
I live near Busan, so I saw little snow but when I lived at Seoul there\'s too much snow.
>>I live near Busan, so I see only little snow but when I lived at Seoul there\'s too much snow.
I love snow, so i was happy. It\'s really beautiful.
>>I love snow so I fee happy to see it. It\'s really beautiful.
I want to talk about my country\'s best scenery region instead.
>>I want to talk about my country\'s region with the best scenery.
It\'s Jeju island! I really love Jeju island.
>>CORRECT!
In Jeju island there\'s emerald color sea and beep blue sky.
>>In Jeju Island there\'s an emerald colored sea and beep blue sky.
It\'s so wonderful. I love sea much. So, when summer come, I often go Jeju island and swim in the sea.
>>It\'s so wonderful. I love the sea much. So, when summer comes, I often go Jeju Island and swim in the sea.
In this year I coudn\'t go to Jeju island so i miss it too much.
>>In this year, I couldn\'t go so I miss it so much.
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