Essay: Why is first impression significant?
학생이 쓴 원문
First impression matters. It is quite important at a business meeting, job interview, and online studying.
So, we have to wear neat clothes and make a nice hair cut.
In addition, it is advisable to wear smile, open our eyes brightly and focus on what your counterpart\'s saying.
The more important thing is your mental condition.
When you have some concerns, they will be exposed unintentionally on your face or gesture.
Positive thinking, happy emotion and confidence make your first impression better.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jong Moo. Thank you for this. Very well said. I totally agree with the points you mentioned here.
- T. Beth
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First impression matters. >>> correct
It is quite important at a business meeting, job interview, and online studying.
>>> correct
>>> OR: It is quite important during a business meeting, job interview, and online studying.
So, we have to wear neat clothes and make a nice hair cut.
>>> correct.
>>> OR: So, we have to wear neat clothes and have a nice hair cut.
In addition, it is advisable to wear smile, open our eyes brightly and focus on what your counterpart\'s saying.
>>> In addition, it is advisable to wear a smile, open our eyes brightly and focus on what your counterpart\'s saying.
The more important thing is your mental condition.
>>> The most important thing is your mental condition.
When you have some concerns, they will be exposed unintentionally on your face or gesture.
>>> correct
>>> OR: When you have some concerns, they will reflect unintentionally on your face or gesture.
Positive thinking, happy emotion and confidence make your first impression better.
>>> correct
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