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2014-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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I was good to talk with you, Debby. :) Today is Wednesday! I know why people don't like Wednesday because people are tired out but they have much time to weekend. However I don't like Monday more than Wednesday. Because it is a day that a weekend is over! Oh, god. And hang in there, too. A weekend is waiting us! <Essay> I guess many people think that fishing is a boring hobby. Unlike other hobby like basketball, football, etc, fishing need a lot of waiting time to catch a fish. Of course some people enjoy waiting to fish. But most people don't, I think.

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Hi there [이름]^^   Here is a trivia for you: Most girls feel ugliest on Wednesdays? hahahahaha Do you feel handsome today? haha. Just kidding.^^ Let\'s look forward to weekends especially fire Fridays^^ (beer day) hahaha   On a serious note, you are good with your ideas and I absolutely agree that fishing is boring and golf! I think walking a distance to hit a ball even farther is really boring.   Thank you for sending this. Keep your creative ideas flowing smart guy!^^   Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections:   I was good to talk with you, Debby. :)>> CORRECT OR> It was nice talking to you Debby ^^Today is Wednesday! >> CORRECT Or> This day is Wednesday.^^I know why people don\'t like Wednesday because people are tired out but they have much time to weekend. >> I know why people don\'t like Wednesdays because a lot of people are tired out but they have much time on the weekend.However I don\'t like Monday more than Wednesday. Because it is a day that a weekend is over! Oh, god. >> However I don\'t like Monday more than Wednesday because it is a day that a weekend is over! Oh, god. OR> Mondays are worst than Wednesdays because it\'s the day after the weekend. OMG! ^^And hang in there, too. A weekend is waiting us!>> And hang in there, too. A weekend is waiting for us!<Essay>I guess many people think that fishing is a boring hobby. >> CORRECT OR> A lot of people would think that fishing is a boring hobby.^^ Unlike other hobby like basketball, football, etc, fishing need a lot of waiting time to catch a fish. >> Unlike other hobbies like basketball, football, etc, fishing needs a lot of waiting time to catch a fish.Of course some people enjoy waiting to fish. But most people don\'t, I think. >> Of course some people enjoy waiting for fish. But most people don\'t, I think.

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