Essay with comment
학생이 쓴 원문
I was good to talk with you, Debby. :)
Today is Wednesday!
I know why people don't like Wednesday because people are tired out but they have much time to weekend.
However I don't like Monday more than Wednesday. Because it is a day that a weekend is over! Oh, god.
And hang in there, too. A weekend is waiting us!
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I guess many people think that fishing is a boring hobby. Unlike other hobby like basketball, football, etc, fishing need a lot of waiting time to catch a fish.
Of course some people enjoy waiting to fish. But most people don't, I think.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Here is a trivia for you: Most girls feel ugliest on Wednesdays? hahahahaha
Do you feel handsome today? haha. Just kidding.^^
Let\'s look forward to weekends especially fire Fridays^^ (beer day) hahaha
On a serious note, you are good with your ideas and I absolutely agree that fishing is boring and
golf! I think walking a distance to hit a ball even farther is really boring.
Thank you for sending this. Keep your creative ideas flowing smart guy!^^
Take care^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections:
I was good to talk with you, Debby. :)>> CORRECT
OR> It was nice talking to you Debby ^^Today is Wednesday!
>> CORRECT
Or> This day is Wednesday.^^I know why people don\'t like Wednesday because people are tired out but they have much time to weekend.
>> I know why people don\'t like Wednesdays because a lot of people are tired out but they have much time on the weekend.However I don\'t like Monday more than Wednesday. Because it is a day that a weekend is over! Oh, god.
>> However I don\'t like Monday more than Wednesday because it is a day that a weekend is over! Oh, god.
OR> Mondays are worst than Wednesdays because it\'s the day after the weekend. OMG! ^^And hang in there, too. A weekend is waiting us!>> And hang in there, too. A weekend is waiting for us!<Essay>I guess many people think that fishing is a boring hobby.
>> CORRECT
OR> A lot of people would think that fishing is a boring hobby.^^
Unlike other hobby like basketball, football, etc, fishing need a lot of waiting time to catch a fish.
>> Unlike other hobbies like basketball, football, etc, fishing needs a lot of waiting time to catch a fish.Of course some people enjoy waiting to fish. But most people don\'t, I think.
>> Of course some people enjoy waiting for fish. But most people don\'t, I think.
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