*** Essay Writing *** Can you tell about someone you dislike?
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Hi, ACRINA! :)
Thanks for doing your homework today.
I do agree that we live in world of people with different personas.
And sometimes, there are just some people who won\'t behave in the same way we do.
So, we have nothing to do but to accept it.
How do you handle people who are hard to deal with?
How about rude people?
Love to hear from you soon!
Happily,
Teacher JACEY ^_^)/
We know that there are so many kinds of people live together.
>> We all know that there are so many kinds of people who live together.
>> OR : We all know that various types of people with different personalities live together.
So in the same situation, we can have different approaches or the way of dealing.
>> So, we have different approaches on dealing with them.
Because of this difference, we need to try to understand other side and make time to have a conversation.
>> Because of our differences, we need to try to understand each other and make time for a conversation.
I dislike people who are rude and don`t care others.
>> I dislike people who are rude and don\'t care about other people.
I try not to cause other inconvenience.
>> I try not to cause inconvenience to others.
For example I love watching movies so I often go to the theater.
>> For example, I love watching movies, so I often go to the theater.
But there are some people who don`t have basic manners.
>> But, there are people who don\'t have basic manners.
They turn on their cell phone with bright screen and even worse, some people answer the phone during the movie.
>> They turn their cell phones on with bright screens. And even worse, some people answer their phone calls during the movie.
And these days young parents don`t think others in public places.
>> And these days, young parents don\'t think about other people in public places.
young children are running around a restaurant or cafe but their parents do not teach or stop them.
>> Young children are running around a restaurant or a cafe but, their parents won\'t even stop them.
in the same manner, One of the main reason of noise complaint issues is young children.
>> In the same manner, one of the main reasons of noise complaint are young children.
I don`t know weather I would be a mother or not.
>> I don\'t know whether I would be a mother or not.
But I`m sure I will teach my child with clear standard education to be a good person.
>> But, I\'m sure I will teach my child a clear, standard education for him/her to be a good person.
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