Essay Writing : What kind of vacation do you like?

2015-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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What kind of vacation do you like? i like the kind of vacation eat and sleep and eat and sleep and eat........... ( do you? ) i think this is the best vacation ever. -> i were not do my homework and just play with my friend. and watched a movie..i think it was a summer vacation..it was very good but....my teacher said build a plan and do what your plan says.. but it's not easy.. anyway i like the kind of vacation that i can play all day and night!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there Harry!

Oh! Playing all day and night is really fun!

When I was young, I also love playing. ^^

I hope that you\'ll have that kind of vacation sometime soon. Hihihi.

Good night. Thanks for doing your homework. ^^

Sweet dreams.
Talk to you tomorrow.

Teacher Nina


What kind of vacation do you like?

i like the kind of vacation eat and sleep and eat and sleep and eat...........

>> I like the kind of vacation wherein I can sleep and eat all day.
( do you? )
>> How about you?
i think this is the best vacation ever. -> i were not do my homework and just play with my friend. and watched a movie..

>> I think the best vacation ever for me is, I don\'t have any homework so I can just play and watch movies with my friends.

i think it was a summer vacation..it was very good
>> Did you mean: I think it was during my summer vacation, I had a great time.
but....my teacher said build a plan and do what your plan says.. but it\'s not easy..

>> But my teacher said, \"Make plans and do it.\" But it is not easy.

anyway i like the kind of vacation that i can play all day and night!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>> correct

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