Essay Writing : Where do young people in this country usually spend their free time? Why?

Hello Harry!

Happy Tuesday!

Thanks for doing your homework.

I want to try Ping-Pong!!!

I think it is very difficult to learn. Hahaha!

You did a good job with your essay.
Kindly go over the corrections below.
Sleep tight. Good night.

See you tomorrow.
Teacher Nina

because of i don\'t know all the people in this country, i don\'t know exactly where do young people in this country spend their free time.

>> I don\'t know exactly what do young people in this country do on their free time because I don\'t know all of the people.

>> OR: I don\'t know how young people in this country spend their free time because I don\'t know all of the people here.

but me and my friend play media game or play ping-pong (or other sports. like dodge ball, soccor or basketball).

>> But in my case, my friends and I play video games, Ping-Pong or other sports like dodge ball, soccer or basketball.

ping-pong are really fun game!!

>> Ping-Pong is a really fun game.

you should try it!!!

>> correct

if you try ping-pong, you will not stop playing it.

>> Once you tried Ping-Pong, you won\'t stop playing it.

ping-pong is a legal drugs.

>> Did you mean: Ping-Pong is like a legal drug.

when you\'re start playing ping-pong, i believe you play it untill someone stop you..

>> When you start playing it, I think you won\'t quit until someone stops you.

anyway ping-pong are fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and media games.....it did not any explantion, you know..

>> Anyway, Ping-Pong and video games are fun to play. I didn\'t say any explanation because you already know it.
so this is the end of ours homework. and goodnight nina~~~

>> So this is the end of my homework and good Nina.

i hope i can hear you tommorrow too. bye

>> I hope I can hear from you tomorrow, too. Bye.

>> OR: I hope I can hear from you tomorrow, too. Goodbye.