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Hi there [이름]!(\",)

I believe you genuinely want to help people and you have the gift or talent for it so utilize it as much as you can. Good luck!(\",)

~T. Lynn

I like people.

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In fact, I like people so much that I get hurt a lot, but I always feel good about what I do with them.

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So, when I think about my dream as a job, the first thing I considered was a job that I could meet people.

>> So, when I thought about my dream job, the first thing I considered was a job that I could meet people.

So while considering various jobs, I thought I had been told that I was a good counselor since I was in middle school.

>> So while considering various jobs, I remembered many people told me that I was good at counseling since I was in middle school.

For example, my middle school teacher once called me. There is a friend in my class who did not eat because she always had to eat alone.

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 In fact, at first, the request was too burdensome. I was not a professional counselor. 

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 This is because she insisted on helping her without any other means.

>> This is because she insisted that I help her.

 But for her, I ate lunch with all my classmates, or went to class together or did a system like Manito.

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 At first, even the curious friends enjoyed them together.

>> For the first time many of friends enjoyed doing this together.

I was so happy, rewarding and happy to help my friends in a practical way.

>> I was so happy. It was rewarding to help my friends in a practical way.

When I first thought about this dream, I had only the curiosity of psychology.

>> When I first thought about this dream, I was only curious about psychology.

 Most people are interested in psychology.

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