essay2_Friends who are similar to or different from us.

2014-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Among our friends, some have similar personalities and tastes to us while others are very different from us in many ways. Each cases has benefis. With friends who are similar to us, we can easily share our thinks and feelings without any confilcts. They can easily feel sympathy with us, be on our side naturally. Also, we can enjoy our hobbies or share our tastes with them. On the other hand, from friends who are different from us, we can learn many things that we haven't thought or done yet before. It extends our territory and makes us more diverse and balanced person. Especially before making an important decision, it is helpful to ask them for advice. Sometimes, we can discovery our aspects or interests that we haven't found on our own. Nevertheless all this advantages, I prefer the friends who are similar to me. Because the most important thing between friendship is, understanding and supporting each others well.

강사 첨삭

 Welcome back, Veronica! How does it feel to go back to our routine once again? I hope you had a great time celebrating Thanksgiving Day with your family~ See you and take care! Among our friends, some have similar personalities and tastes to us while others are very different from us in many ways. >>Among our friends, there are some who have similar personalities and tastes while others are very different from us in many ways.  Each cases has benefis. >>Each case has a  benefit. With friends who are similar to us, we can easily share our thinks and feelings without any confilcts. >>With friends who are similar to us, we can easily share our thoughtd and feelings without any confilcts.  They can easily feel sympathy with us, be on our side naturally. >>They can easily feel sympathy towards us, be on our side naturally.  Also, we can enjoy our hobbies or share our tastes with them. >>CORRECT!  On the other hand, from friends who are different from us, we can learn many things that we haven\'t thought or done yet before. >>On the other hand, from friends who are different from us, we can learn many things that we haven\'t thought or done before.  It extends our territory and makes us more diverse and balanced person. >>CORRECT! Especially before making an important decision, it is helpful to ask them for advice. >>CORRECT! Sometimes, we can discovery our aspects or interests that we haven\'t found on our own. >>Sometimes, we can discover our aspects or interests that we haven\'t found on our own. Nevertheless all this advantages, I prefer the friends who are similar to me. >>Despite all these advantages, I prefer friends who are similar to me.  Because the most important thing between friendship is, understanding and supporting each others well. >> Because the most important thing between friendship is, understanding and supporting each other well.  

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