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(Teacher Rose! Sorry for hand in late. Your feedback is not an obligation because I'm late. I just want to upload it. Please review just in case of possible. Thanks!) Subject: If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? When I was young, I knew that I had a talent for dance and I loved it. First time I found my gift was at 11, at my friend's birthday. There was a small dance competition. I participated it and just moved by feeling the music. I couldn't remember how I did but at some point, everyone looked at me and applauded. I placed first. Another episode is when I was class president at a second year student of middle school. For preparing the school art festival, I learned newest dances by myself and taught it to classmates. Our class's performance got a great success. For a while, I wanted to be a dancer or a rhythmic gymnast. I remembered I told my hope to parents but they didn't listen it seriously. They just hoped that I get a normal job. I don't want to blame them because I didn't keep insisting my hope or doing some effort on my own. But If I could return a childhood, then I have had a chance to learn a dance seriously and never gave up my talent despite any disapproval.

Of course I will still check your composition, ha! ha! I envy you for having that skill! I have always dreamed of becoming a professional dancer~ TT But I think it will only stay as a dream TT (Teacher Rose! Sorry for hand in late. >>Teacher Rose! Sorry for handing it in late.Your feedback is not an obligation because I\'m late. >>Your feedback is not necessary because I did it late.  I just want to upload it. >>CORRECT! Please review just in case of possible. >>Please review in case it is possible.  Thanks!)>>CORRECT!Subject: If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose?>>CORRECT!When I was young, I knew that I had a talent for dance and I loved it. >>When I was young, I knew that I had a talent of dancing and I loved it. First time I found my gift was at 11, at my friend\'s birthday. >>The first time I found my gift was when I was 11, at my friend\'s birthday.  There was a small dance competition. >>CORRECT!  I participated it and just moved by feeling the music. >>I participated in it and just moved by feeling the music. I couldn\'t remember how I did but at some point, everyone looked at me and applauded. >> I couldn\'t remember how I did it but at some point, everyone looked at me and applauded.  I placed first. >>I won the first place. Another episode is when I was class president at a second year student of middle school. >>Another episode was when I was a class president of the second year students of our middle school. For preparing the school art festival, I learned newest dances by myself and taught it to classmates. >>To prepare for the school art festival, I learned the newest dance by myself and taught it to my classmates. Our class\'s performance got a great success. >>CORRECT!For a while, I wanted to be a dancer or a rhythmic gymnast. >>CORRECT! I remembered I told my hope to parents but they didn\'t listen it seriously. >> I remembered I told my hope to my parents but they didn\'t listen to it seriously. They just hoped that I get a normal job. >>CORRECT! I don\'t want to blame them because I didn\'t keep insisting my hope or doing some effort on my own. >>CORRECT!  But If I could return a childhood, then I have had a chance to learn a dance seriously and never gave up my talent despite any disapproval. >> But if I could return to my childhood, then I would have had a chance to learn dancing seriously and never give up my talent despite any disapproval.