estate price
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nowaday Korea has a real estate problem. News is talking the problem everyday. Government has announced new policy. but estate price has grown up each time.
I bought apartment one years ago. I thought luck fortune. My apartment price rose up a ten million won each months. I made earn a hundred million won.
Politician make a lot of money by selling estate.
They made earn over billions won.
and they said we made estate price stabilize. I hate politicians. They made a new policy and they made earn money. as if stock.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir john. Thank you for this. Lucky for you then, you have earned money from it too.
- T. Beth
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nowaday Korea has a real estate problem.
>>> Nowadays, Korea has a real estate problem.
News is talking the problem everyday.
>>> The news is talking about that problem everyday.
>>> OR: The problem is being aired in the news everyday.
Government has announced new policy. but estate price has grown up each time.
>>> The government has announced a new policy but the price of real estate has grown each time.
I bought apartment one years ago.
>>> I bought an apartment a year ago.
I thought luck fortune.
>>> I thought of luck in fortune.
My apartment price rose up a ten million won each months.
>>> My apartment price rose up a ten million won each month.
I made earn a hundred million won.
>>> I earned a hundred million won.
Politician make a lot of money by selling estate.
>>> Politicians make a lot of money by selling real estate.
They made earn over billions won.
>>> They earn over billions of won.
and they said we made estate price stabilize.
>>> and they said they will stabilize the real estate.
I hate politicians.
>>> correct
They made a new policy and they made earn money. as if stock.
>>> They made a new policy and they made a lot of money, as if it is a stock.
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