Etiquette of keeping time

2021-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

In social life, It is important to arrive on time. I think that keeping time is the basic etiquette in daily life. So, it is very important to keep time and appointments. I’ve never been late to attend to events or appointments. I always arrive earlier than the others. I hate people who don’t come on time. I think that the manners of keeping time are like his or her personality.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
There are some expressions that we need to discuss.
I want to make sure that they are exactly what you meant.
Let\'s talk about it tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In social life, It is important to arrive on time.
>> With regard to social rules, it is important to arrive on time. 
I think that keeping time is the basic etiquette in daily life.
>> I think that keeping track of time is a basic etiquette in daily life.
So, it is very important to keep time and appointments.
>> So, it is very important to keep track of time and appointments.
I’ve never been late to attend to events or appointments.
>> I’ve never been late in attending events or going to appointments.
I always arrive earlier than the others.
>> Correct
I hate people who don’t come on time.
>> Correct
I think that the manners of keeping time are like his or her personality.
>> I think that manners of being on time reflects someone\'s personality. 

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