Eton college

It was a surprise that almost of the graduates entered a university even though the school don't stress study. One third of them go on to Oxford or Cambridge. Not stressing the study but pride and responsibility seemed to motivate them to study harder. The school has precepts as follows. 1. Don't use other's weak point. 2. Don't be a unmanly fellow. 3. Don't look down on a weak person. 4. Always take care of others. 5. Don't be a self important person. 6. Being brave to be first in offensive thing. It is a basic institute to make a man who have broad mind, consider other people and regard the importance of humanity rather than a man who study well and getting a great job. They always keep in their mind this words. " for the weak people, for the citizen, and for the nation". We need to ask ourselves whether we have a noble spirit, matured consciousness and strong patriotism.

Dear [Name]. [이름],   A fantastic Friday to us! ^.^   Thank you for continuing your sharing about Eton College! ^^ I want to have my own educational institution that follows Eton College.   Anyway, sorry for the short comment! T.T However, I still hope you will enjoy reading! ^^ Happy weekend and Liberation Day! ^^, See you on Monday! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     ***PROPER WRITING***   It was a surprise that almost of the graduates entered a university even though the school don\'t stress study. One third of them go on to Oxford or Cambridge. Not stressing the study but pride and responsibility seemed to motivate them to study harder. The school has precepts as follows. 1. Don\'t use other\'s weak point. 2. Don\'t be a unmanly fellow. 3. Don\'t look down on a weak person. 4. Always take care of others. 5. Don\'t be a self important person. 6. Being brave to be first in offensive thing. It is a basic institute to make a man who have broad mind, consider other people and regard the importance of humanity rather than a man who study well and getting a great job. They always keep in their mind this words. \" for the weak people, for the citizen, and for the nation\". We need to ask ourselves whether we have a noble spirit, matured consciousness and strong patriotism.     ***CORRECTIONS***   It was a surprise that almost of the graduates entered a university even though the school don\'t stress study. >> I THINK WHAT YOU REALLY WANT TO WRITE IS: It was a surprise that almost all of the graduates entered university even though the school don\'t stress study. One third of them go on to Oxford or Cambridge. >> CORRECT! Not stressing the study but pride and responsibility seemed to motivate them to study harder. >> CORRECT! The school has precepts as follows. >> The school has precepts as follow. (PATTERN: precepts as follow or precept as follows) 1. Don\'t use other\'s weak point. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Don\'t use other people\'s weak points. >> OR: Don\'t use another person\'s weak point. 2. Don\'t be a unmanly fellow. >> Don\'t be an unmanly fellow. (GRAMMAR RULE: AN + noun that starts with a VOWEL SOUND or A + noun that starts with a CONSONANT SOUND) 3. Don\'t look down on a weak person. >> CORRECT! 4. Always take care of others. >> CORRECT! 5. Don\'t be a self important person. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Don\'t be an arrogant person. 6. Being brave to be first in offensive thing. >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: Be brave to be the first in resisting offensive things. It is a basic institute to make a man who have broad mind, consider other people and regard the importance of humanity rather than a man who study well and getting a great job. >> It is a basic institute to make a man who has a broad mins, considers other people and regards the importance of humanity rather than a man who studies well to get or have a great job. (You need to check SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT in your sentence.) They always keep in their mind this words. \" for the weak people, for the citizen, and for the nation\". >> They always keep these words in their mind, \"For the weak people, for the citizen, and for the nation.\" (Proper Punctuation and Capitalization) We need to ask ourselves whether we have a noble spirit, matured consciousness and strong patriotism. >> CORRECT!