euthanasia

2025-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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We need strict standards to running euthanasia because that is related to human life and existence. Basically we should respect our life itself, must not permit recklessly and carelessly it. I only want to it, when I don\'t have my consciousness as human and it is impossible to recover serious disease too old. It is not a human life a state of life-sustaining treatment . We don\'t need to obsess to live long itself as organisms.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Ms. [이름]!
People like us, who are \"PRO_LIFE\", value the existence of life for every individual. However, we respect the decision of a certain person if he/she want to 
undergo euthanasia. We don\'t know the pain and how they suffer.
Aki~

We need strict standards to running euthanasia because that is related to human life and existence.
>>>  We need strict standards for running euthanasia because that is related to human life and existence.

Basically, we should respect our life itself, must not permit recklessly and carelessly it.
>>> Basically, we should respect our life itself, and must not permit recklessly and carelessly.

I only want to it, when I don\'t have my consciousness as human and it is impossible to recover serious disease too old.
>> I only want to it when I don\'t have my consciousness as a human, and it is impossible to recover serious disease too old.

It is not a human life a state of life-sustaining treatment .
>>> It is not a human life, a state of life-sustaining treatment.

We don\'t need to obsess to live long itself as organisms.
>>>  We don\'t need to obsess over living long itself as organisms.

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