Even if you\'re not interested in festivals, can you think of a festival that would be interesting f
학생이 쓴 원문
In fact, I like doing what I have never done.
The reason why I like doing that is because I can learn and feel some things as I did do that.
For example, I think I am an introverted person so I am not suitable for going clubs and doing a work related with service.
But I didn’t know whether it is suitable or not suitable for me to do that before I will do that in reality.
So, I practiced going clubs and having a part time guiding people in theaters.
As expected, I couldn’t enjoy an atmosphere of club and I realized that I am not suitable for going clubs.
But unexpectedly, I could enjoy a part time about service. After that time, I did a lot of part time related with service.
It is a proof that we can learn and feel some things by experiencing even it isn’t suitable for me.
In conclusion, even if I think some festivals looks boring, I can have interests and go there because I think I learn some things in the festival.
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much, [이름]! Based on your essay, I can see that you are a flexible person. You are willing to adapt to new things! Keep it up! See you! -Faith-
In fact, I like doing what I have never done.>> In fact, I like doing things I have never done before.
The reason why I like doing that is because I can learn and feel some things as I did do that.
The reason why I like doing that is because I can learn and feel some things as I did do that.
>> The reason why I like doing that is because I can learn and experience new things as I do them.
For example, I think I am an introverted person so I am not suitable for going clubs and doing a work related with service.
For example, I think I am an introverted person so I am not suitable for going clubs and doing a work related with service.
>> For example, I think I am an introverted person, so I am not suitable for clubbing and doing work related to service.
But I didn’t know whether it is suitable or not suitable for me to do that before I will do that in reality.
But I didn’t know whether it is suitable or not suitable for me to do that before I will do that in reality.
>> But I don’t know whether they are suitable for me or not because I haven\'t done them in reality.
So, I practiced going clubs and having a part time guiding people in theaters.
So, I practiced going clubs and having a part time guiding people in theaters.
>> So, I practiced going to clubs and having a part-time job guiding people in theaters.
As expected, I couldn’t enjoy an atmosphere of club and I realized that I am not suitable for going clubs.
As expected, I couldn’t enjoy an atmosphere of club and I realized that I am not suitable for going clubs.
>> As expected, I couldn’t enjoy the atmosphere in clubs and I realized that it is not for me.
But unexpectedly, I could enjoy a part time about service.
But unexpectedly, I could enjoy a part time about service.
>> But unexpectedly, I could enjoy a part-time job about service.
After that time, I did a lot of part time related with service.
After that time, I did a lot of part-time jobs related to it.
It is a proof that we can learn and feel some things by experiencing even it isn’t suitable for me.
It is a proof that we can learn and feel some things by experiencing even it isn’t suitable for me.
>> It is a proof that we can learn and enjoy some things by experiencing them even if they are not suitable for us.
In conclusion, even if I think some festivals looks boring, I can have interests and go there because I think I learn some things in the festival.
In conclusion, even if I think some festivals looks boring, I can have interests and go there because I think I learn some things in the festival.
>> In conclusion, even if I think some festivals look boring, I can have interests and go there because I think I can learn some things from them.
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