Even though you may have been terrified by a particular ride, would you go on it again?
학생이 쓴 원문
No. Because I hate to ride roller coaster and pirate ship. And I scare to high amusement ride. When I got roller coaster that largest in Korea, it was terrible. So my legs were shaked.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
I feel you. I\'m also scared of heights. Riding a roller coaster is one of my fear.
~Teacher Erin
No. Because I hate to ride roller coaster and pirate ship.
>>No, because I hate to ride a roller coaster and pirate ship.
And I scare to high amusement ride.
>>And, I\'m scared of heights.
When I got roller coaster that largest in Korea,
>>When I ride the largest roller coaster in Korea,
it was terrible.
>>CORRECT
So my legs were shaked.
>>So my legs were shaking.
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