Every familly has a problem.

Hi there [이름]!

Thank you so much for sending this in today.

It is good to go home regularly. ^_^ I really like going to my mom\'s hometown.

You are really a great person. You know how to handle conflicts. ^^

Please go over the corrections below.

Talk to you soon!

Every family has a problem.

>> Correct!

Of course It is problem for my family to have a less chance to talk each other.

>> Did you mean: The problem in my family is that we have a less chance to talk to each other.

>> OR: The problem in my family is that we seldom talk to each other.

because everyone has a occupation.

>> Because everyone has an occupation.

>> Better: Because everyone is working.

so they are tired when they arrived at home and time is too late to make a chance to talk each other.

>> Did you mean: So, they are tired when they arrive home and the time is too late for us to talk.
Lack of communication makes a conflicts between members of family.

>> Lack of communication makes a conflict between the members of the family.

>> OR: Lack of communication leads to conflict between family members.
To deal with that, I sometimes go home.

>> Correct!

I am the only one who lives apart from the rest of family so they have a desire to treat me a delicious food.

>> I am the only one who lives apart from the rest of the family so, they always treat me a delicious food.

>> OR: I am the only one who lives apart from my family so, they usually prepare food for me.
Actually It looks like they make time for me, but It is for themselves.

>> Correct!
When we gathered, we start to talking about our lives and what happened since I leaved home.

>> When we gather, we start talking about our lives and what happened since I left the house.
>> OR: When we gather together at home, we start talking about our lives and what happened since I left the house.

In the procedure of this part, we solve our conflicts and problems.

>> Did you mean: In this way, we solve our conflicts and problems.
we start to understand again.

>> We start to understand each other again.

but Its effect isn\'t last long, so I have to go home periodically.

>> But the effect of it doesn\'t last long so, I have to go home periodically.

>> OR: But it doesn\'t last long so, I have to go home regularly.