Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from you

2018-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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When it comes to education, most of my parents' generation were so poor that they could grauduate from only elementary schools on average. Some people even couldn't finish their elementary school. Hardly could they finish studying as much as they wanted. However, my generation's education background mostly is college or university. It's thanks to my panrents' generation's sacrifice. It is not exaggeration to say that my parents' generation used to work fo make money to support us for education. For my children's generation, it will be rare to see people who have never been to college or university. Every koreans think that the higher the level of educatio is, the better they are treated and the more valuable they are.

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Some people even couldn\'t finish their elementary school. 
>>>>Some people couldn\'t even finish their elementary school. 
Hardly could they finish studying as much as they wanted.
>>>>They could hardly finish their studies as much as they wanted.
However, my generation\'s education background mostly is college or university.
>>>> However, in my generation\'s educational background is mostly college or university.
It\'s thanks to my panrents\' generation\'s sacrifice.
>>>>Thanks to my parents generation\'s sacrifice.
It is not exaggeration to say that my parents\' generation used to work for make money to support us for education.
>>>>It is not an exaggeration to say that my parents\' generation used to work for money to support our education.

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