Every test.
학생이 쓴 원문
Every test make me nervous.
Because I don't know how difficult the test will be.
I need to be prepared, but I don't know that my devotion is enough for the test.
Matter goes worse, If the test is short-answer style.
I have to pay more time to understand and to re-write it.
but, If there is one test which make me nervous most, that must be the scholastic ability test. It must be taken If person want to go university.
It tests educational ability throughout all of our 18 years course.
Depend on the score which I got, the university is decided.
The student who got high score can apply for good university.
On the other hand, the student who got low score can't go good university.
the score decide the future of one person.
So it made me nervous.
but After that, It gave me a super freedom.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!!!
It\'s nice to know that you know that you were able to handle those challenging situation.
I am proud of you! I learned new things again from you.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts pertaining to this topic.
I am so happy that you find time to improve your writing skill. Keep it up!
Have a great night! Talk to you tomorrow!
Teacher Nina
Every test make me nervous.
>> Correct!
Because I don\'t know how difficult the test will be.
>> Correct!
I need to be prepared, but I don\'t know that my devotion is enough for the test.
>> Did you mean: I need to be prepared, but I don\'t know if my confidence is enough for the test.
Matter goes worse, If the test is short-answer style.
>> The situation gets worse if the test needs short answer.
I have to pay more time to understand and to re-write it.
>> Correct!
but, If there is one test which make me nervous most, that must be the scholastic ability test.
>> But if there is one test which made me nervous the most, it was the scholastic ability test.
It must be taken If person want to go university.
>> It must be taken if the person wants to go to a university.
It tests educational ability throughout all of our 18 years course.
>> Did you mean: It tests the educational ability of all the eighteen years course.
Depend on the score which I got, the university is decided.
>> Depending on the score which I got, the university is decided.
The student who got high score can apply for good university.
>> The student who got a high score can apply in a good university.
On the other hand, the student who got low score can\'t go good university.
>> On the other hand, the student who got a low score can\'t go to a good university.
>> OR: On the other hand, the student who got a low score can\'t enter a good university.
the score decide the future of one person.
>> The score decides the future of a person.
So it made me nervous.
>> Correct!
but After that, It gave me a super freedom
>> But after that it gave me freedom.
It\'s nice to know that you know that you were able to handle those challenging situation.
I am proud of you! I learned new things again from you.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts pertaining to this topic.
I am so happy that you find time to improve your writing skill. Keep it up!
Have a great night! Talk to you tomorrow!
Teacher Nina
Every test make me nervous.
>> Correct!
Because I don\'t know how difficult the test will be.
>> Correct!
I need to be prepared, but I don\'t know that my devotion is enough for the test.
>> Did you mean: I need to be prepared, but I don\'t know if my confidence is enough for the test.
Matter goes worse, If the test is short-answer style.
>> The situation gets worse if the test needs short answer.
I have to pay more time to understand and to re-write it.
>> Correct!
but, If there is one test which make me nervous most, that must be the scholastic ability test.
>> But if there is one test which made me nervous the most, it was the scholastic ability test.
It must be taken If person want to go university.
>> It must be taken if the person wants to go to a university.
It tests educational ability throughout all of our 18 years course.
>> Did you mean: It tests the educational ability of all the eighteen years course.
Depend on the score which I got, the university is decided.
>> Depending on the score which I got, the university is decided.
The student who got high score can apply for good university.
>> The student who got a high score can apply in a good university.
On the other hand, the student who got low score can\'t go good university.
>> On the other hand, the student who got a low score can\'t go to a good university.
>> OR: On the other hand, the student who got a low score can\'t enter a good university.
the score decide the future of one person.
>> The score decides the future of a person.
So it made me nervous.
>> Correct!
but After that, It gave me a super freedom
>> But after that it gave me freedom.
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