Every time I got stress from anything
학생이 쓴 원문
I just think I need a time alone
I always felt tired when all of stress come to me
so I should get a rest that I want
pass the few hours and I returned back and know who I am
some time I used to leave to silent place alone for thinking and turning back myself
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting this composition.
I appreciate you for expressing your thoughts about it.
I hope that whenever we fell stressed, we\'ll be able to get through it. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> Every time I get stressed from anything,
I just think I need a time alone
>> CORRECT.
I always felt tired when all of stress come to me
I always felt tired when all of stress come to me
>> I always felt tired when all kinds of stress come to me
so I should get a rest that I want
so I should get a rest that I want
>> CORRECT.
pass the few hours and I returned back and know who I am
pass the few hours and I returned back and know who I am
>> Past few hours and I returned back and know who I am.
some time I used to leave to silent place alone for thinking and turning back myself
some time I used to leave to silent place alone for thinking and turning back myself
>> Sometimes, I used to leave alone to a silent place for thinking and turning back myself.
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