Everyday is a new day?
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Hi there [이름]!(\",)
Thank you for your thoughts about time. It reminded me of one of my favorite passage from the Bible. It is Ecclesiastes Chapter 3 ( A Time for Everything). I\'d like to share the first verses from the passage:
1 There is a time for everything,
and a season for every activity under the heavens:
2 a time to be born and a time to die,
a time to plant and a time to uproot,
3 a time to kill and a time to heal,
a time to tear down and a time to build,...
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
Confucius say \"day is a new, and also everyday is a new\".
>> Confucius said, \"Every day is a new day\".
OR IS IT>> Every day is a new beginning.
He insists that people has to study everyday and should always develop.
>> correct!
One day is 24 hours.
>> One day has 24 hours.
It is repeated all his life.
>> This is repeated our whole life.
Yesterday\'s time seems look like to come again today.
>> Yesterday\'s time seems to come again today.
But, let\'s think about it once.
>> correct!
Yesterday\'s time is not completely different today\'s time.
>> Yesterday\'s time is not completely different from today\'s time.
William Shakespeare says that time is not going to come and go, but time is never gone.
>> William Shakespeare said that time is going to come and go, but time is never gone.
Time which has gone once never come again.
>> Time which has gone once never comes back again.
Time can always be new.
>> correct!
Carrie Underwood said to find happiness, I tell about the time.
>> correct!
I think time is always a new. Let always try and study hard.
>> I think time is always new. Let us always try and study hard.
And then, come happiness and new time to you.
>> And then happiness and a new time will come to you.
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