Everyone has a mission in lif1e. What do you think your mission is? What is the most important thing
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Hi Ms. [이름],
Can you imagine a life filled with: vibrant joy, bright with the glorious light of an alive mind, quiet and renewing inner peace, ever expanding creative inspiration, and a heart that keeps giving? Wow! Wouldn\'t that be amazing? Then imagine you in your self-realized greatness shining you heart, light and joy out into the world. That\'s what we get in exploring things. I hope you would reach your dreams.
~Teacher Verna~
I want to do lots of things which I want during my life.
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First thing is living in other countries for several years.
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I want to experience other life in other culture.
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But I already have my ordinary life here, so it\'s too hard for me.
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If I have a good English score in TOEFL or TOEIC, I would have a chance to study abroad.
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Our company support that.
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But it\'s really rare thing to have this chance.
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Because only one or two workers in our company can go abroad to study MBA a year.
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I really want to have this chance in our company.
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Actually, I\'m too lazy person, so I don\'t study for English exam such as TOEFL or TOEIC.
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But I will do my best for my dream right now.
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Second one is raising my son well.
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I hope he become a very friendly person, and everyone loves him always.
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Anyway, I think my life is mine.
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I can do everything and I always want to explore new things.
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I\'m really a curious person, so I hope to experience new things every time.
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