Everyone in the family looks great, right?
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Our family is a total 7 people. Mom, Dad, Me, Brother, Grandma, Grandpa, Aunt. My mom is good at her body, she looks great in any outfit, and she\'s so pretty (so I feel a bit envious..). My dad is very kind to me, and he does his best in everything he does. My younger brother is very cute, he has a pretty dimple when he smiles, and he listens to me well. Grandma cooks well, and Grandpa is very good at calligraphy. My aunt is a professor for a science and she is very smart!! I\'m... always full of energy, and I think I treasure my friendship with my friends.
P.S. During our class, I couldn\'t tell the my favorite actor name, so I looked up the actor and uploaded it with a picture. First person\'s name is Robert Downey Jr, and second person\'s name is [이름] Soo-hyun.
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Hello, Maria!
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I am glad you\'re able to answer your homework.
This is a good composition and I appreciate your effort. However, I have made some modifications.
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Our family is a total 7 people. Mom, Dad, Me, Brother, Grandma, Grandpa, Aunt.
>>> My family has a total of 7 members; mom, dad, my brother, grandma, grandpa, aunt and me.
My mom is good at her body, she looks great in any outfit, and she\'s so pretty (so I feel a bit envious..).
>>> My mom takes care of her brother and she looks great in any outfit. She\'s also very pretty that\'s why I am a bit envious.
My dad is very kind to me, and he does his best in everything he does.
>>> My dad is very kind to me and he gives his best in everything he does.
My younger brother is very cute, he has a pretty dimple when he smiles, and he listens to me well.
>>> My younger brother is very cute. His pretty dimple appears when he smiles and he listens to me well.
Grandma cooks well, and Grandpa is very good at calligraphy.
>>> Grandma cooks well and grandpa is very good at calligraphy.
My aunt is a professor for a science and she is very smart!!
>>> My aunt is a Science professor and she is very smart!!
I\'m... always full of energy, and I think I treasure my friendship with my friends.
>>> I\'m always full of energy and I know how to treasure friendship.
P.S. During our class, I couldn\'t tell the my favorite actor name, so I looked up the actor and uploaded it with a picture.
P.S. During our class, I couldn\'t tell the my favorite actor name, so I looked up the actor and uploaded it with a picture.
>>> P.S. During our class, I couldn\'t tell the my favorite actor\'s name, so I looked it up and uploaded a picture of him.
First person\'s name is Robert Downey Jr, and second person\'s name is [이름] Soo-hyun.
>>> CORRECT
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