everyone\'s responsibility
학생이 쓴 원문
It might be existence weaknesses or poor points in welfare system.
Cunning people use very well fast it and know how to avoid the law .
Almost crimes are performed by people who support and share with each other.
They make solidarity for gaining benefit and money.
So It is natural that crime continue to until now.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Indeed, we have what we call \"Mutual Agreement\", where both parties agree on policies and terms within the company. The sad part, they are even partners in crime.
See you!
Aki~
It might be existence weaknesses or poor points in welfare system.
>>> It might be existing weaknesses or poor points in the welfare system.
Cunning people use it very well fast it and know how to avoid the law .
>>> Cunning people use it very well, fast it and know how to avoid the law
Almost crimes are performed by people who support and share with each other.
>>> Almost all crimes are performed by people who support and share with the people involved.
They make solidarity for gaining benefit and money.
>>> They make solidarity for gaining benefits and money.
So It is natural that crime continue to until now.
>>> So it is natural that crime continues until now.
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