Everyone should plan their own funeral.

2017-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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If I found out my parents prepare their funeral without informing me, it would make me really sad. Because it seems like they will die soon. But I think everybody must plan their own funeral to reduce their guardian's expense. There are a lot of company in Korea that people can prepare their funeral paying some amount with monthly payment. It is really good idea for business and people would like to prepare a funeral. This idea make people lessen a load when they die. Nobody know when they die, I think we should plan our funeral.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


A MAJESTIC Monday to you! ^.^


First of all, I would like to thank you for not skipping in doing your homework.

I can really say that you are a very diligent student.

I am lucky to have a student like you.

You make me proud.


Anyway, when it comes to being ready, I think there\'s nothing wrong with that.

We already know that all of us will meet our last days in this world.

Therefore, I think it is better to be ready than never.

I think you already felt that I totally agree with you.

Good job, [이름]! ^^


That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you in a bit! ^^.


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~


P.S.: Have some time to look for more guides on how to make better writing compositions. Thanks a lot! ^.^



If I found out my parents prepare their funeral without informing me, it would make me really sad.

>> If I found out my parents prepared their funeral without informing me, it would make me sad.

Because it seems like they will die soon.

>> It is because it seems like they will die soon.


>> OR: If I found out my parents prepared their funeral without informing me, it would make me sad, because it seems like they will die soon.


But I think everybody must plan their own funeral to reduce their guardian\'s expense.

>> However, I think everybody must plan their funeral to reduce their guardians\' expenses.

There are a lot of company in Korea that people can prepare their funeral paying some amount with monthly payment.

>> There are a lot of companies in Korea where people can prepare their funeral paying some amount as monthly payment.

It is really good idea for business and people would like to prepare a funeral.

>> It is a really good idea for businesses and people that would like to prepare a funeral.

This idea make people lessen a load when they die.

>> This idea makes people lessen a load when they die.

>> OR: This plan helps people lessen a load when they die.

Nobody know when they die, I think we should plan our funeral.

>> Nobody knows when they die, so I think we should plan our funeral.

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