Everyone should plan their own funeral.
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Dear [이름],
A MAJESTIC Monday to you! ^.^
First of all, I would like to thank you for not skipping in doing your homework.
I can really say that you are a very diligent student.
I am lucky to have a student like you.
You make me proud.
Anyway, when it comes to being ready, I think there\'s nothing wrong with that.
We already know that all of us will meet our last days in this world.
Therefore, I think it is better to be ready than never.
I think you already felt that I totally agree with you.
Good job, [이름]! ^^
That\'s all for now! ^^
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... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
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If I found out my parents prepare their funeral without informing me, it would make me really sad.
>> If I found out my parents prepared their funeral without informing me, it would make me sad.
Because it seems like they will die soon.
>> It is because it seems like they will die soon.
>> OR: If I found out my parents prepared their funeral without informing me, it would make me sad, because it seems like they will die soon.
But I think everybody must plan their own funeral to reduce their guardian\'s expense.
>> However, I think everybody must plan their funeral to reduce their guardians\' expenses.
There are a lot of company in Korea that people can prepare their funeral paying some amount with monthly payment.
>> There are a lot of companies in Korea where people can prepare their funeral paying some amount as monthly payment.
It is really good idea for business and people would like to prepare a funeral.
>> It is a really good idea for businesses and people that would like to prepare a funeral.
This idea make people lessen a load when they die.
>> This idea makes people lessen a load when they die.
>> OR: This plan helps people lessen a load when they die.
Nobody know when they die, I think we should plan our funeral.
>> Nobody knows when they die, so I think we should plan our funeral.
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