Everything has ambivalence.

2021-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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It is awesome to think about the idea. In my opinion, If many people can read a lot of books, It could regard as good and worthwhile events. On the other hand, from a humanistic point of view, I think it can be depreciated in value of literature. Therefore it can be parable as a double-edged blade. There are advantages and disadvantages. That is, there is ambivalenc

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha!
I think it\'s a great idea.
Literature is meant to be shared by everyone,
It\'s the greatest form of art in the world.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It is awesome to think about the idea.
>> Correct
In my opinion, If many people can read a lot of books, It could regard as good and worthwhile events.
>> In my opinion, if many people can read a lot of books, it could be regarded as a good and worthwhile scenario.
On the other hand, from a humanistic point of view, I think it can be depreciated in value of literature.
>> On the other hand, from a humanistic point of view, I think it can lead to the depreciation of the value of literature.
Therefore it can be parable as a double-edged blade.
>> Therefore, it can be like the parable of the double-edged blade.
There are advantages and disadvantages.
>> Correct
That is, there is ambivalenc
>> That is, there is ambivalence.

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