Everything makes me happy.

2019-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

Today\'s weather is fine. I want to watch something interesting relating these days. I spent a not good chu seok last weekend. I feel some down these days. I want to go outside to work out. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hi! Thank you for doing your homework. It seems that you are a happy and positive person. I was happy reading your homework today. Until the next one! :)

~Teacher Sheila

Today\'s weather is fine.
>>CORRECT

I want to watch something interesting relating these days.
>>I want to watch something interesting that is related these days.

I spent a not good chu seok last weekend.
>>I spent a not good Chu Seok last weekend.
OR>>Chu Seok last weekend was not good.

I feel some down these days.
>>I geel down these days.

I want to go outside to work out.
>>CORRECT

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