Excellent Doctor

2020-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Theme: What kind of person makes an excellent doctor? I think a patient person makes an excellent doctor. Because doctors do many surgery and they usually take a lot of time. Doctors need a life-respecting personality, too. Doctors are for saving people so they need life-respecting personality. I think I have life-respecting personality so I want to be a boctor : )

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]. ^^

Thank you for sending a composition.

I agree with you!

I really hope you\'ll be a doctor someday! ~~

See you soon!

~t. Ally

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I think a patient person makes an excellent doctor.

>> CORRECT!

Because doctors do many surgery and they usually take a lot of time.

>> Because doctors do many surgeries and those usually take a lot of time.

Doctors need a life-respecting personality, too.

>> CORRECT!

Doctors are for saving people so they need life-respecting personality.

>> CORRECT!

I think I have life-respecting personality so I want to be a boctor : )

>> CORRECT!

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