Excite older with him

2022-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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When I was before date with my boyfriend, I always nervous and hurry. Usually think about mu future dream and I should gonna be a famous musical star or singer. But now I have changed my mind a lot since I met my boyfriend. I\'m very excite about older with him.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ann!

He brings out the best in you. Your relationship with him is great! :)

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When I was before date with my boyfriend, I always nervous and hurry.

>> When I wasn\'t dating my boyfriend yet, I was always nervous and in a hurry.

Usually think about mu future dream and I should gonna be a famous musical star or singer.

>> I usually think about my future if I want to be a famous musical star or singer.

But now I have changed my mind a lot since I met my boyfriend.

>>CORRECT

I\'m very excite about older with him.

>> I\'m very excited to grow older with him.

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