Exciting experience
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I have been to Thailand a few years ago and there I had experience watching a big snake show.
The snake\'s length may be about 2m and it was very huge.
The show host came to me and put a snake around my neck.
Of course, the host told me not to worry.
However, I was so scared that I froze.
It was a very scary exciting experience for me.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
I have been to Thailand a few years ago and there I had experience watching a big snake show.
>> Correct
The snake\'s length may be about 2m and it was very huge.
The snake\'s length may be about 2m and it was very huge.
>> Correct
The show host came to me and put a snake around my neck.
The show host came to me and put a snake around my neck.
>> Correct
Of course, the host told me not to worry.
Of course, the host told me not to worry.
>> Correct
However, I was so scared that I froze.
However, I was so scared that I froze.
>> Correct
It was a very scary exciting experience for me.
It was a very scary exciting experience for me.
>> Correct
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