Exciting Power English.

2010-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 janel

학생이 쓴 원문

I have been studied Power English with my teatcher, Janel. Iwas really afraid to talk with my new teacher, Janel. Now, I can't wait for the call from my teacher. Every day, I'm really excited for Power English. Well...... actually, I was going to study English with my old teacher, Erick. I used to study before I went to New York. But, studing with him cost a lot of money. When I compare to Power English with that, Power English is better. Most of all, my own Diary is rewrited by my teacher, Janel. I will study more in Power English with my teacher, Janel. Thanks for teaching......... Janel.

강사 첨삭

Aw.... That is one of the sweetest things that any of my students have told me. Thank you sweet [이름]. You have made me smile this big: ^___________________________^   Anyway, I feel privileged teaching a smart kid like you. I look forward to teaching you more things about English.- Teacher Janelle   I have been studied Power English with my teatcher, Janel. >>>I have been studying with Power English with my teacher, Janel.Iwas really afraid to talk with my new teacher, Janel. >>>I was really afraid to talk with my new teacher, Janel.Now, I can't wait for the call from my teacher. >>>CorrectEvery day, I'm really excited for Power English. >>>Every day, I get really excited about Power English.Well...... actually, I was going to study English with my old teacher, Erick. >>>CorrectI used to study before I went to New York. >>>CorrectBut, studing with him cost a lot of money. >>>...but studying with him costs a lot of money.When I compare to Power English with that, Power English is better. >>>When I compared him with Power English, Power English turned out to be better.Most of all, my own Diary is rewrited by my teacher, Janel. >>>Most of all, my own Diary is rewritten by my teacher Janel.I will study more in Power English with my teacher, Janel. >>>CorrectThanks for teaching......... Janel. >>>Correct. (You are very welcome.)

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