excursion, teasing and bullying among students

When most of us think about school violence, we think of tragidies like the one at Columbine High School.What children are worrying is not physical violence if you ask the children about school violence.Rader what children fear most is the verbal violence from their friends. It is survey's result derived from 1000 peples from 5th to 12th grades. The survey cited the experience of children, examples of exclusion, teasing and bullying. Many kids feel that such behaviors of agression are affecting their academic performance.

Hi Sophia!! ^_^ Thank you for your composition. You did great. Keep it up! I provided some corrections to some ofyour sentences. You can review them if you have time. See you in class. Take care! ^_^ __Teacher Nica__ When most of us think about school violence, we think of tragedies like the one at Columbine High School. >> Correct! What children are worrying is not physical violence if you ask the children about school violence. >> What children are worried about are not physical violence at school. Rader what children fear most is the verbal violence from their friends. >> They are mostly worried about verbal violence from their friends. It is survey\'s result derived from 1000 peples from 5th to 12th grades. >> There is a survey that was derived from 1000 people from the 5th and 12th grade. The survey cited the experience of children, examples of exclusion, teasing and bullying. >> The survey cited the experiences of the children at school like exclusion, teasing and bullying. Many kids feel that such behaviors of agression are affecting their academic performance. >> Many kids feel that such aggresive behaviors are affecting their academic performance.